Post by wildchild19 on Jun 15, 2006 1:13:07 GMT -5
Hmm I've been playing around with this character a lot lately, and since I don't do too much in the anime/manga category, I need some constructive criticism, so this character is from Tokyo Mew Mew, I don't know if anyone here has heard of it but it's in the anomie/manga 2 board. So read and rate pretty please i know it's long but I have got Twizzlers and sparklers ;D ;D
The cafe was too pink for her tastes but still she had needed a job and the manager was an interesting fellow. Cafe Mew Mew was a popular place for teens and young adults, and she never had a spare moment here and the pay plus the tips where great.
It was after hours and her first day here she hadn't communicated much with the other girls who worked here exept for the Pudding character who was always putting on a show and causing more destruction then the child was worse. she had been damned sure there where child labor laws in this country..so why was a what? 8 or 9 year old working here? Sighing Mayroo all but tossed the dish rag into the sink and admired her clean-up.
Mayroo was 16 and one hell of a girl, if you could call her that. The tomboy had a attitude that could match Mint's even on her worst of days, and her stubbornness was ridiculous. To top that off she was proud. As soon as work had gotten over Mayroo had dashed into the bathroom threw off the ridiculous waitress get-up and thrown on a pair of faded blue jeans and dark green tank that read in glittery gold writing "Drop and give me twenty" At the moment she was bare foot but her black flip flops lay just beyond the door with her backpack.
Pushing her mid-back length reddish-brown hair behind her ears she glanced about one last time with bright emerald eyes before deciding to give Ryou a heads up that she was going. Now the thing was to go find the annoying manager.
Dashing up the stairs to the apartment above the cafe she blinked as she came to a sudden halt. The whole upstairs was dark, except one room across the hallway, yellow-green light spilled from beneath the door and curiously she began walking toward it. She could hear voices on the other side. Pushing the door open she stepped in.
"Hey guys, I'm all-"
"No! Mayroo get out of the.."
Mayroo didn't get a chance, a blinding light hit her head on and she was suddenly tossed into the air and into a fuzzy warm light. opening her eyes she could just make out a small figure jumping into her body then darkness.
Ryou stared first at the passed out girl on the floor then at Keiichiro.
"Oh damn..."
Mayroo was floating in darkness, she stretched out on whatever was holding her afloat..air maybe? she didn't care well actually whoever that was calling her name ought to cram it bfore she permanently shoved their own foot down their throat. She curled into a tighter ball.
"Mayroo..Mayroo get up!"
"I don't wanna.." She complained opening first one eye then the other and yawing into Ryou's face. "Hey..back off..there is a thing called personal space man."
She wiggled from Ryou's grip and stared at him then at Keiichiro. "Uhh..what are you staring at..hey what where ya'll doing when I opened the door?"
"Well..it was an accident, you walked into the ray.and uhmm well you better have a look yourself." Keiichiro held up a mirror then winced at her scream.
"What the hell? This was not in the job description!"
Staring back herself she reached up touching the reddish fox ears situated on her head then yelped when she actually felt her own fingers on them, Her sensual ears flattened against her head at the next yelp she let out.
"And whats with the outfit!?"
She stared down at herself. Instead of her beloved tank and jeans combo she was sitting on the floor in a Tokyo Mew Mew outfit, jeez she knew the 6 girls (including Berri) existed but..she stared down at herself. A dark green leotard with a lighter green skirt then the dark green boots combat style and laced with black ribbon? There was also a dark green green ribbon tied into her hair and a dark green collar-like thing with black lace around it with a weird charm. What kind of sick joke was this?. The she noticed the tail.
"Uhh..She fainted Ryou..."
"Call the rest of the girls in....it's going to be a long night."
The cafe was too pink for her tastes but still she had needed a job and the manager was an interesting fellow. Cafe Mew Mew was a popular place for teens and young adults, and she never had a spare moment here and the pay plus the tips where great.
It was after hours and her first day here she hadn't communicated much with the other girls who worked here exept for the Pudding character who was always putting on a show and causing more destruction then the child was worse. she had been damned sure there where child labor laws in this country..so why was a what? 8 or 9 year old working here? Sighing Mayroo all but tossed the dish rag into the sink and admired her clean-up.
Mayroo was 16 and one hell of a girl, if you could call her that. The tomboy had a attitude that could match Mint's even on her worst of days, and her stubbornness was ridiculous. To top that off she was proud. As soon as work had gotten over Mayroo had dashed into the bathroom threw off the ridiculous waitress get-up and thrown on a pair of faded blue jeans and dark green tank that read in glittery gold writing "Drop and give me twenty" At the moment she was bare foot but her black flip flops lay just beyond the door with her backpack.
Pushing her mid-back length reddish-brown hair behind her ears she glanced about one last time with bright emerald eyes before deciding to give Ryou a heads up that she was going. Now the thing was to go find the annoying manager.
Dashing up the stairs to the apartment above the cafe she blinked as she came to a sudden halt. The whole upstairs was dark, except one room across the hallway, yellow-green light spilled from beneath the door and curiously she began walking toward it. She could hear voices on the other side. Pushing the door open she stepped in.
"Hey guys, I'm all-"
"No! Mayroo get out of the.."
Mayroo didn't get a chance, a blinding light hit her head on and she was suddenly tossed into the air and into a fuzzy warm light. opening her eyes she could just make out a small figure jumping into her body then darkness.
Ryou stared first at the passed out girl on the floor then at Keiichiro.
"Oh damn..."
Mayroo was floating in darkness, she stretched out on whatever was holding her afloat..air maybe? she didn't care well actually whoever that was calling her name ought to cram it bfore she permanently shoved their own foot down their throat. She curled into a tighter ball.
"Mayroo..Mayroo get up!"
"I don't wanna.." She complained opening first one eye then the other and yawing into Ryou's face. "Hey..back off..there is a thing called personal space man."
She wiggled from Ryou's grip and stared at him then at Keiichiro. "Uhh..what are you staring at..hey what where ya'll doing when I opened the door?"
"Well..it was an accident, you walked into the ray.and uhmm well you better have a look yourself." Keiichiro held up a mirror then winced at her scream.
"What the hell? This was not in the job description!"
Staring back herself she reached up touching the reddish fox ears situated on her head then yelped when she actually felt her own fingers on them, Her sensual ears flattened against her head at the next yelp she let out.
"And whats with the outfit!?"
She stared down at herself. Instead of her beloved tank and jeans combo she was sitting on the floor in a Tokyo Mew Mew outfit, jeez she knew the 6 girls (including Berri) existed but..she stared down at herself. A dark green leotard with a lighter green skirt then the dark green boots combat style and laced with black ribbon? There was also a dark green green ribbon tied into her hair and a dark green collar-like thing with black lace around it with a weird charm. What kind of sick joke was this?. The she noticed the tail.
"Uhh..She fainted Ryou..."
"Call the rest of the girls in....it's going to be a long night."