My Poetry

[Old Treecko]

I usually write stuff when I'm feeling a strong emotion. This one, entitled "The Bird in the Distance" was written when I first fell in love.


Like the bird in the distance,
I am soaring high.
Wishing for that special someone
As I brave the dark night sky.
I might be a finch
Filled to the top
With happiness, hope and joy.
It's enough to make one keep going on, and never, ever stop.
Or, I could be the vulture,
The scavenger of its kin.
He searches for what the finch already has.
And when she finds it, she leaves only the skin.
Or maybe I'm a simple songbird
happy on a branch above.
But one thing I can say for sure:
I'm definitely in love.

Here's another:
How Long, written 6/7/06
How long must I wait
For you to come find me?
How long should I stand here?
Until you finally realize it?
I'm afraid to talk to you,
But you're always there
In my head.
You're an image of perfect there,
Undisturbed by evil or ugliness.
Just like you are
in the real world.
Makoto... Mike...
How do I say it?
I bet you've got lots of admirers.
You did last year.
Choosing me would be like
a child picking a mutant cat
Out of the box of kittens.
You've got plenty more to pick who aren't
weird
obsessed
spastic
idiotic.
And yet I still find myself wishing...
Wishing for that special thing...
You.
I love you.
You don't know it yet,
But I do.
So how long must I wait
For you to come find me?
How long shall I stand here?
Or have you already realized...?

[Old Treecko]

I found another poem from my notebook:

I've been giving you th cold shoulder for months.
But I think about you when I hold my pen.
You and I used to be there for each other.
As I sigh, I wish we were friends again.

A compliment from you, a flicker of concern-
I'm looking for the signs.
Even though I still love you,
I no longer want you to be mine.

Baka says I'm too dramatic,
That I should come out of my shell.
But I know that If I do that,
You and him will only give me hell.

But If I stay inside of it,
Things still won't be right.
I'll think of the way you tortured me,
And my heart will turn black as night.

What do I do, Makoto-sama?
Should I let our relationship die?
In my heart I know I could never do that.
I just want to be friends, you and I.

[Malice In Wonderland]

oldtreecko said:

I found another poem from my notebook:

I've been giving you th cold shoulder for months.
But I think about you when I hold my pen.
You and I used to be there for each other.
As I sigh, I wish we were friends again.

A compliment from you, a flicker of concern-
I'm looking for the signs.
Even though I still love you,
I no longer want you to be mine.

Baka says I'm too dramatic,
That I should come out of my shell.
But I know that If I do that,
You and him will only give me hell.

But If I stay inside of it,
Things still won't be right.
I'll think of the way you tortured me,
And my heart will turn black as night.

What do I do, Makoto-sama?
Should I let our relationship die?
In my heart I know I could never do that.
I just want to be friends, you and I.

I like your poems..who si 'makoto-Sma? and 'baka' you refer to in this poem?

[Old Treecko]

Well, Makoto-sama is the person that these poems are all about. And Baka... he's just an idiot friend of mine, also a friend of Makoto-sama's.

[Malice In Wonderland]

I thought for a minute that Makoto-Sama was off of Sailor Moon as was Baka...

XD..sorry..I guess my brain elft me...XD

[Old Treecko]

I got a Quizilla Account, so I'm posting more of my poetry there. I'll put some of it up here, but If you wanna see more, just go there. (I only have one, which is right here)
quizilla.com/users/OldTreecko...wipe_away_fear

Wipe Away Fear
Somewhere in this upsetting world,
There lives a frightened little girl.
Tucked comfortably into bed,
her mind turns to thoughts of dread.

Will I make it through the night?
Will I overcome this fright?
She cowered under her covers, scared
While the violent thoughts in her mind blared.

Above,the mighty angels took a peek
At the saddest child of the week.
They sent a new one to descend
And answer the girl's prayers for a friend.

As the angel was falling down,
She wondered why the little girl frowned.
Searching among the stars for the abode,
she landed on a small side road.

The little girl looked out the window then,
She saw the place where the man had once been.
She gasped as she saw something brush by.
A shadow of something that was able to fly.

Then something happened on this dark night.
An angel appeared to her, gorgeous and bright.
Her flaxen hair and fluffy wings
Were more beautiful than the wives of kings.

"Do not worry, little one,"
The angel said to the girl who was stunned.
"I've come in response to your prayer!"
She announced while stroking the scared girl's hair.

"I'm here to take away your fears,
And wipe away all of your tears."
The little girl's eyes grew wide.
She wiped her sheets where she had once cried.

Now, after suffering for so long,
This little girl was able to stay strong.
She no longer sheds those tears
Because she found someone to wipe away fear.