a poem that may not be as good as I think it is

[new girl]

if the good times never end,
when do my begin?
If friendship is just a word
why does is it bring people joy?
if it takes more Energy to smile then to frown
then why can't I grin?
If no one is a loser
why can't I win?
if to the world I'm just one person but to one person I'm the world
who are they?
and if a pictures worth a thousand words
why don't we just go to school to learn how to draw?
and if this stupid quote book is suppose to be a spirit lifter
why do I feel so happy tearing out the pages?


like I said this poem probably isn't that good I wrote it a couple of years ago when my mom got me a quote book for my birthday ;D

[new girl]

new said:

if the good times never end,
when do my begin?
If friendship is just a word
why does is it bring people joy?
if it takes more Energy to smile then to frown
then why can't I grin?
If no one is a loser
why can't I win?
if to the world I'm just one person but to one person I'm the world
who are they?
and if a pictures worth a thousand words
why don't we just go to school to learn how to draw?
and if this stupid quote book is suppose to be a spirit lifter
why do I feel so happy tearing out the pages?


like I said this poem probably isn't that good I wrote it a couple of years ago when my mom got me a quote book for my birthday ;D

it's horrible isn't it?

[new girl]

WHY did I post this poem?

[bologna4ya]

^{I actually like it.Everything makes a lot of sense.}[/color]

[new girl]

I'm going to some other poem board bye!

[yuki]

I like this poem..Its good.

[Mikay still new girl]

bologna4ya said:

^{I actually like it.Everything makes a lot of sense}

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*blink* *blink* really?

[Mikay]

Wow cool somone didn't laugh at my poem when I showed it to them

[bologna4ya]

^{Yes.I do like it.}

[mikay]

I'm going to go look at someone elses poems

[Jy]

After you look at some one else's you should write some more poetry, This poem was fantastic, it literately struck a cord in the center of my heart! Please write more.