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Post by Malice In Wonderland on Jun 5, 2006 20:00:59 GMT -5
WARNING! DO NOT READ UNLESS YOU WANT YOUR EYES TO FEEL LIKE ACID IS ON THEM! [glow=red,2,300]Okay...now for meh poems.... FLASE HOPE Hope is falsehood. just as happiness is. Because just as your hopes and Happiness are rasied into belivieing their is beauty and joy in the vast evils of the world. Proof shines through that all good is flase and theres no such thing as a better day.[/glow] More if you want it.... Please don't steal...  |
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Post by Malice In Wonderland on Jun 5, 2006 22:37:15 GMT -5
The weird thing about my Poetry is, i'm normally a Happy-go-lucky girl..I never feel these thing(hardly)......XD
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Post by yuki on Jun 6, 2006 14:26:20 GMT -5
I liketh your poem..I wouldnt mind reading more.
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Post by Malice In Wonderland on Jun 6, 2006 15:29:20 GMT -5
I liketh your poem..I wouldnt mind reading more. I'M LIKED!!! I shall find my notebook and get it!^^ |
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Post by new girl on Jun 6, 2006 16:23:43 GMT -5
I liketh your poem..I wouldnt mind reading more. I'M LIKED!!! I shall find my notebook and get it!^^ well yeah! Your poems rock!  |
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Post by Malice In Wonderland on Jun 6, 2006 20:11:09 GMT -5
Heres another!!!
[glow=red,2,300]Crimson Sky
Blood red tears fall from the crimson sky.
The tears mingle with the blood that runs so cold.
Blending in with the blood thats been drawn.
trying hard to please the whole world.
Look at what I've become now.
Everything that I have loathed.
I cry my blood red tears that mingle with my crimson blood.[/glow]
I like that one..it has a beat in my head!^^
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Post by paranoid212 on Jun 6, 2006 20:23:40 GMT -5
I like your poems.
Read mine and tell me what ya think.
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Post by Malice In Wonderland on Jun 6, 2006 20:33:16 GMT -5
TOTALLY DUDE!
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Post by Old Treecko on Jun 13, 2006 18:26:00 GMT -5
I like it! It's great! Post more!
(I love reading other peoples' poetry)
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Post by Malice In Wonderland on Jun 16, 2006 14:16:12 GMT -5
I like it! It's great! Post more! (I love reading other peoples' poetry) -huggles- tank ya! |
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Post by blackwillows on Jun 18, 2006 11:09:15 GMT -5
Of the two, I think I like the first one best... but that's probably because it has a similar mood to the one and only poem I've ever written, and I can relate to it...
~Will
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Post by Malice In Wonderland on Jun 18, 2006 11:52:14 GMT -5
Of the two, I think I like the first one best... but that's probably because it has a similar mood to the one and only poem I've ever written, and I can relate to it... ~Will Really? thanks! |
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